YAYYY

Accepted!

I'd like to learn more of Lilah and her actual magic abilities or specialties. I assume it is something to do with wind?

I like the pair of Sycorax and Absidi where one of them is the weapon and the other is the handler.

Ace's form is a bit lacking in the personality department, but I'll let it slide since I assume she'll be not too too big of a player yet. And ofc, it can be developed in threads too.

I give accepted

I give my acceptance stamp of approval!

oh my god the formatting hang on
 

Name: Somnus
*Nickname(s): 
Gender: Male
Pronouns: he/him
Sexuality: aroace
Deity of (Up to 3 things): Dream, Illusions, Unreality
*Symbols: Down feathers (the ones they stuff into pillows y’know)

Powers/Abilities: The more simple side of his abilities is changing form at will, creating hologram-like illusions, and very rudimentary dimension traveling. The dimension traveling appears to be instantaneous and while he is in the other dimension he cannot interact with what he sees though he can choose where to go if he knows of its existence. His more annoying ability would be the fact that he can see dreams, be it the sleep kind or one's deepest desire kind. Dreams, as defined by Somnus, are the manifestation of a person’s subconscious. This is not something he can control, if he looks at people he will probably end up accidentally reading their subconscious mind. Even without looking at people he can still sometimes feel a person’s dreams, sorta like seeing light from behind your eyelids.
*Pets:

Appearance(s): Even if his look varies on the daily, Somnus does have a default appearance, that of a kid. No more than fourteen, short and scrawny with long straight black hair that almost reaches his ankles. His skin is sickly pale and his dark eyes glaze over, looking uncomfortably like that of a dead person. The most noticeable thing is the scars. Big patches of uneven skin, twists and blisters, burn marks. Though of course normally Somnus would not appear in this form. Oftentimes he copies others, perhaps he sees a winged deity and the next day he too sports the same pair of wings, a glance at a trending outfit and the next moment he’s in the same look. The two things that always stay the same, no matter what form he takes, is the child-like appearance and his glassy dead eyes. He never tries to change his build, his height, the bit of baby fat still left on his cheeks, and it seems he’s incapable of masking his eyes. Another big part of his appearance would be the floating queen-sized bed that he rests on. This bed too would change appearance, usually to match his outfits. He rarely walks on his own, always using his bed as a form of transportation.

Personality: Somnus has a rough relationship with reality. Centuries of reading dreams and dousing himself in illusions has taken its quite obvious toll. Oftentimes he’d talk about events that have never happened, or think what is actually happening is just another dream. A constant spew of gibberish and cryptic nonsense. He’s a very easily influenced person, not just in appearance but in personality as well. Most times he tends to mirror those he talks to without even realizing it. As a result of that, Somnus’s own moral codes and values aren’t as strict either. He’d be willing to do just about anything if he thought it was a good idea at the time.
*Theme Song(s): I’d Rather Sleep by Kero Kero Boni
*Typically Worshiped By: 
Domain: As a being of chaos, he has no need for a Domain and definitely not enough belongings to need a storage space, so he never bothered to find a place for himself.
*Temples:
Weapons: He’s got the fighting prowess of a frail Victorian pre-teen so no.

Backstory: Somnus was mortal once. Maybe. Probably. Who knows. 
There’s a faint memory of the fear of death, which he’s sure immortals do not experience, (pretty sure at least) and not being able to breath (asphyxiation is never a pleasant experience), though, as always, it’s hard to tell if they’re his memories or someone’s very weird and messed up dreams (nightmares?). It doesn’t really matter, he reasoned, because memories were not real. Or well physically real at least (tangibly?). Point is, he can’t hear, smell, taste, touch, or see it in 4k real life quality so that must mean it’s not real. Although, are things not real just because they’re not tangible, because they were in the past, in his head?
No, no, getting sidetracked. Right, where were we? Yes, his backstory. Somnus was mortal once. (Maybe. Probably. Who knows.) And he always just did what he wanted, went where he wanted. It’s hard to recall how many winters had passed, the moons that had cycled through overhead. His memory exists in short staccato, melding and mending with the stuff people push to the back of their brains. The bigger picture is a little easier to see, he thinks. He helped people for a while, not sure why, but that got boring so he started pranking people instead. Though most of them would consider it more torture than prank but the line was so blurry that he just blended the two together, for simplicity's sake. Eventually the pranking got boring as well, so now he’s just traveling. Looking for something, maybe. Looking for something he doesn’t know he’s looking for, probably. Lost, though he’s not sure he knows what that feels like.

Other: "Why would there be a deviled egg on the window sill if you weren't supposed to eat it" - Brennan Lee Mulligan

Changed sections of the Darkest Devout's form:
Age: Unknown, but old
Sexuality: Lesbian
Species: Unknown, but speculated to be a relative to satyrs
Appearance: The Darkest Devout has long black hair, and her skin is hidden entirely under darkness and robes. Their left hand is made of gray fire, not unlike Dust’s gray flame. It has horns like a ram, with the right one having its tip broken off. She is tall, compared to the average human, standing at 6 ft. They wear a black, religious-looking robe with small leather armouring underneath. She wears a plain leather glove to hide its hand, and a half-mask to hide their face. Her eyes would be visible over the mask, but it keeps them closed. They sometimes have large, magical, gray fire wings.
Personality: Despite her obvious ties to Dust, it does not prefer violence. They are more than willing to talk to foes that are not annoying, and maybe even heal them if she likes/pities them enough. The Devout is also quick to counter arguments against its position somewhere, as long as it’s not lost or just wandering about without reason. I don’t know any more words to describe DD, but you’ve seen her in action now.
Powers: Her only innate ability is the power to heal with just will. It can summon gray fire from its left hand, as well as using it to create their wings to take flight. Her knife can absorb blood to use as an extension of the blade’s motion. They can reshape shadows with its will, as well as travel through them
Backstory: The Darkest Devout was born into a peaceful life, before her village was subjugated by a tyrant warlord, and forced into enslavement for their plentiful healing abilities. Many of them prayed to the gods, but examples were made of them; including the youngest, who had her name stolen and tongue cut out. Miraculously, the young devout escaped servitude before anything else could have been taken from it, and fled. They travelled far away, and learned of all the things taught in the temples of distant lands. And one more thing, something she, at that point, considered with hate. Eventually, the nameless child thought she learned enough to free its people from the torment she heard from enemies of the warlord; a hubristic choice that left them blinded. Even without sight to see the gods, or voice to get their attention, eventually one of them heard her prayers. And it burned away the wretched warlord, and devoured their soldiers into the darkest void of shade; for the god that answered the prayers was the hungering wolf. Time passed, and the nameless child became a mere tale to the village of healers and the Darkest Devout began wandering the realms; healing the downtrodden and obscuring them from the vile in dark nights.

i only reworded the age and species. changed her sexuality to being a lesbian, and to counter its power up from that i removed the section about being able to heal with the blood loosed from its knife(not really i just didn't feel like that power is something the devout would have); as well as clarifying what the knife can use blood for in attacks. i reworded the personality a great deal to better reflect how they've been portrayed, as well as removed the section about being able to feel that she has scars from the appearance. and i completely redid the backstory because i was unhappy with it. i think that's all the edits i made, but i know for fact that the edits are exclusive to these sections. I completely forgot to add her shadow abilities to both versions of the form.

Last edited by AshTheAvaricious (April 8, 2023 14:07:47)

Name: Dust
Nickname: The Wolf
Gender: Divine Terror
Pronouns: It/Its
Sexuality: Not You
Deity of: Hate, Darkness, Wrath
Symbols: a clawed hand around a greyed soul
Powers/Abilities: Dust can bind shadows to its will, allowing it to use them as weapons, shields or transportation as it bends their shape with thought alone. All of that also applies to itself, as it is a shade. It can summon gray fire, as well as pull out various objects from itself(usually knives, as that’s the majority of what it keeps in storage). And the revenge ability that we all know about but honestly takes way too long to write down. Its voice will default to the most hated/feared of each listener, without any overlap. It can near perfectly mimic the voice, appearance, and memory of anybody who’s soul it has devoured. It can still mimic the voice and appearance of those it has not, but the voice is off and its face does not change(nor do the coloration).
Appearances: Dust is able to shift its form as it desires, but tends to appear in one of two forms with variations:

Combat Form: It resembles Ash’s Warrior form in some aspects. 7’5” ft tall, clawed hands and feet, spiked plate armour of a dark gray metal. It is cast in pitch darkness, the only colours being scarlet lines along its armour’s edges and detailing. Dust has no visible details on its face aside from a permanent, sharp-toothed grin stained in its own black ichor. It has black segmented horns curving backwards, a bright red stained against the edges of the segments, and massive black demonic wings with crimson membranes. It has a tail similar in function to an iguana's, but it is spikier. When hunting, Dust will don its Wolf mask, which is a full faced bronze mask detailed into a wolf(duh). The mask forever drips Dust’s unholy ichor from its teeth. The shade lets its long, and surprisingly well kept, blue hair loose, or it does not fully manifest; instead its form trails into smoke-like shadows billowing down from its head.

Casual Form: Remarkably similiar to the combatant form in physique, however it is more loose with how its wings appear and its horns become negotiably infrequent. Its wings can manifest as tattered feathered wings, sometimes they are made of flame like its Devout, occasionally they’ll resemble Ash’s, and rarely they are not dissimiliar to bugs. It wears a jacket with weird metal shoulder pads that pulse in crimson light, however it doesn’t wear anything under that. Its tail will typically manifest the same as it usually does, however on occasion it will instead manifest its lower body as a serpent or centipede; without the extra tail, or legs if it’s gone the serpentine route. When neither a serpent or a bug, it wears legwear similiar to riding pants, although refitted for easier motion.

example constructs in heroforge: https://www.heroforge.com/load_config%3D507055652/ https://www.heroforge.com/load_config%3D507552298/ https://www.heroforge.com/load_config%3D508907787/

Personality: Dust hates the divine, and it hates sound. But it hates solitude and silence even moreso, and its den is a quiet madness. It is willing to appear frequently in the mortal plane as a result of this, as it prefers the petty squabbles and garnered hate over deafening forever.

Or at least that’s what Dust would tell you when effectively questioned. In truth, it is lonely, and hopes to one day find something or somebody like it. It despises its knowledge, as it saw all of the history marked by the souls it's devoured; and Ash's brought only brought disgust to its thought. It wants to live quietly with its children, without interruption from gods or mortals. Dust is tired, only putting up a veneer of power to strike fear into those that would assail it; and it yearns to learn rest. While all this might paint Dust as something to be pitied, it cannot be forgotten that it doesn’t care about who or what it harms so long as they are either dissuaded from attacking it or it has had its fun. It is still cruel, and it is still hungry. It does not know the difference between the two anymore, and it does not care to learn. It wishes to devour, until its peace is within its grasp. And then it wishes to bleed into silence, for once it has found its peace it will not need to survive. But until its dying peace is close, it will play the role of the dark’s wrathful executioner.
Theme Songs: None Of Thee Above - Shayfer James, Built To Burn - Shayfer James
Typically Worshipped By: It isn’t worshipped except by fools that don’t know it can hear them. And the Darkest Devout.
Domain: Dust is homeless.
Weapons: Broken swords that erupt in gray flame when Dust wills them to. A handful of knives, and itself. If its swords are repaired, it can manipulate them into a myriad of other tools and weapons, including into one larger weapon; as long as the swords are able to fill the material. Which honestly just means that it’s stuck to standard real world sized weapons, no weirdly large axes/hammers or impractically long katanas.
Backstory: Dust was not always a being of its own, in an endless beginning, it had no self or mind; only a will forged to be manipulated by Ash. It was a tool made of the magic from an age forgotten to the realms, and nothing of its ilk still exists; as the shades were crafted as weapons, and none survived to the common day. Eventually, after countless time, two gods were sealed in the shade’s master, and the power released from their dying let loose a mind with each order passed to the tool. It began to think, and finally thought to move from its chains; releasing itself upon the land. It hunted, at first for fun; but eventually it acquired the means to devour. It last devoured the souls of three divine, before it trapped itself into a bottomless hell of solitude.
Other: Hey so I completely redid Dust's form. Yeah it's the same basic gist, but it will never been the same again. Yeah I included lore elements that I can't explore in roleplay. Sorry.

Last edited by AshTheAvaricious (April 17, 2023 14:23:00)

Name: ??? (totally not because I just didn't have a name)
*Nickname(s): Throne
*Age: Unknown, appears to be late 20s, mid 30s, but likely much older than that.
Gender: Male
Pronouns: He, him
Sexuality: Straight
Species: Human(?) mage
*Deity They Work For: High ranking Clocktower Mage for Time. He primarily reports to him, but will listen to Chronos. He will likely take no orders from any other deity.
Appearance: Throne is a tall, athletic male with short gray/black hair and golden eyes. His skin is a warm brown color.
He wears clothing that would be somewhat indicative of a noble, or at least someone who cares a lot about what they look like. He has a primarily white clothing theme. With white pants, vest, and jacket, accompanied with a black shirt. He also has accents of gold about his appearance, such as golden buttons for his vest. He carries a dark brown satchel wherever he goes.
Admittedly, of course, his clothing will change based upon the environment, such as more warmer clothing for the cold, and more desert clothing for hotter environments. I won’t really go into much detail, but they usually will always have that similar color theme.
Personality: Throne has a very professional aura about him. He’s here for a job, and that is what he will do. Very meticulous and methodical. None of those other shenanigans that those other Clocktower mages and apprentices do. In such an example, in comparison to Heaven, who tries to put a stop to any chaos happening in the tower, Throne simply would rather ignore it, and just focus on his work. Not that he frequents the Clocktower that often. Despite being a Clocktower Mage, he doesn’t show up often, he usually passes through the Clocktower, talks to Time, and then is soon off again not after long.
Speaking of Throne’s relationship to Time, Throne is an almost ideal servant for him. Their personalities are very similar. Throne has an unquenched thirst for knowledge, and has the ambition to back it up. Throne definitely is one of the types of people who think that the flow and control of information is power. He’s very direct when it comes to things, and is the type of person to prefer getting to the point and being efficient rather than slowly getting to it. However, his directness isn’t blunt and rude all the time. Sometimes, it has a notion of politeness and manners as well.
Throne strongly believes in sticking to a code. No matter the circumstances. As soon as he takes an order, he will ensure that it is done. If there is something that he believes that conflicts with the laws of the world, he will set it straight. Now, don’t mistake this for him having bias or opinions and trying to force them upon others, he tries to be as impartial in his judgements as much as possible, and thinks on how he should act on things through logical reasoning. Once he comes to a conclusion to this reasoning, he will see it though, even if emotionally he disdains such an action. This can be also on the reverse side as well. He may let things happen even if it’s horrible.
This sort of aloofness, lawfulness, and rarely showing up to the clocktower can certainly give an aura of arrogance, and Throne knows this. Does he try to dispel such a perspective? No, he doesn’t really care about that. Is he actually arrogant? A little, yes.
*Theme Song(s):
Weapons: Throne carries two blades on him, both on his left hand side. One of them is a rapier, and the other is a smaller shortsword. While both of them appear to be inadequate, high quality,and infused with magic, the shortsword looks to be the one that is of more importance. This is because his swordsword is imbued with much more magic spells for durability, and overall is more apt for spellcasting activities.
Powers: Throne has specialized himself on seals and protection magic, but also is equally specialized in portals and transportation magic. Most of his seals require preparation and a ritual, so other than quick magic shields and whatnot, do not expect them in a fight unless he has prep time. Instead, he corporates more of his conjuration/transportation magic.
His seals are extremely powerful and have a wide range, from being quick simple ways to parry and block, to seals meant to close interdimensional portals and stop war machines.
He can also get a bit creative with his magic shields and portals, and can very well use them for offense. In fact, I would even say that he’s simply able to conjure magic objects. For example, he can summon large magic shields, but can very well use them as giant blocks to push and smash things around. It gives him a high level of versatility, but he usually does not enjoy going down the route of smashing things and making a huge mess. So really expect him to go more with a sort of dueling style when in combat.
Backstory: Not much of Throne’s past is known, but from observation of his habits and such, most can glean that he probably came from some sort of family with high standards. The manners, the dress, the professionalism, it all indicates so. As to where the extreme abidingness to law and the thirst for knowledge came from, it’s still mysterious. It appears that he isn’t really going to reveal any sort of details, as he probably thinks it to be irrelevant. But I suppose there is a reason as to why he is always not at the Clocktower…
*Crush: Knowledge, being lawful neutral.
Other: *Deity here*

Name: Trove
Nickname: Crimson Hawk
Age: It doesn't
Gender: Lightbulb
Pronouns: It/They
Sexuality: Nah
Species: uuhh Light? idk mate. sure is a thang though.
Appearance:
Body:Trove is made of piercing light, disallowing sight of its true being. However, it appears to be rather masculine, given what detail the magical sigils and feathers upon its face and legs reveal. Their wings thrum in the same divine light as the rest of their being, however red and blue feathers can be seen through the light, especially at the edges of its wings. Their pointed ears are mostly obscured by its dark red hair, however they still poke through. There is a streak of a lighter gray, which somehow feels blue to observe, in the right side of their hair. Its avian feet have scales, coloured a teal comparable to the shade of some seas. Their pointed tail ends in a similiarly coloured tip, with a few spikes leading up to it. It has burn marks covering the backside of their hands, and a golden halo floats a few inches above their head. Its mouth is pitch dark, almost like a solid shadow, and does not move with its speech.

Clothes:They wear a white and blue robe, with assumably something beneath, and dark red pants rolled up above its knees. The robe has an almost golden yellow at its cuffs, and a blue collar in the style that many mages might wear(also with golden edges). They also have a blue cloth draped around its waist, oddly lined in a faded scarlet. There is an unknown purple metal composing the head of a hawk, sewn into the robe at the center of where its collar bone would be.
oh and here's two heroforge creations: https://www.heroforge.com/load_config%3D510404389/ [/url][url=https://www.heroforge.com/load_config%3D510438981/]https://www.heroforge.com/load_config%3D510438981/
Personality: Trove cares deeply about the preservation of life, despite the fact that they find its slow motions and quiet voices sickening. It can sometimes be read as cruel or rude, however that is because it does not understand sentimentalism. They carry themself proudly, and speak quite loudly; as any light will make itself known, either accidentally or purposefully. It seems to be entirely unable to wish harm upon any being, with the sole exception of Dust; and even with the exception, they do not seem to hate or pity the shadow. Trove is self-confident, almost to the point of egotistical, however given its skill at wielding the mystic arts, most of it is deserved. But only most, they’re still rather likely to end up endangering itself or others nearby by getting too curious. Oh yeah, Trove is a very curious creature, loving nothing more than to learn new things. It's almost a wonder that it never wound up at the Clocktower, but perhaps they simply didn't have the time. Heh. get it?
Tools: Trove will, on occasion, carry an ashwood staff; which is seemingly alive. It's rather unknown whether they carry it to channel magic in emergency or simply to assist in movement through a world that it can't quite see clearly, as it's never bothered to explain its presence to others.
Powers: Trove is skilled in a myriad of magicks, most notably the art of healing, plant magic, and lightning. It is unable to wield fire, however. They can move light to form weak barriers, however struggle with even that basic act in light.
Backstory: Dust was born of the power from two dying gods, a Vulture destroyer and a Peregrine creator. It became the Heir of the Vulture, quantifying hunger and wrath in its destruction. However, the light of the Peregrine did not settle well within the shade, and was by-and-large rejected from its will. The creator’s power split from Dust, and became a glowing hawk of light. They’ve since studied magic at various locations, and constructed a nest atop an island kept in the sky by its wizardry. It was killed for the first time shortly after Dust ascended, revealing that they share the undying nature of its twin Heir. After recovering, it attempted to learn how to twist their body for quite some time, until finally giving up and returning to the world below.
Other: For clarification, while all parties involved in the creation of Trove either became divine or already were gods, they are not.

Name: Nova (In Arithnia), Haze (GGaD)

*Nickname(s): The Deep Illusionist

Gender: Male

Pronouns: He/Him/They

Sexuality: Straight

Deity of: Illusion, Curses, Rebellion 

*Symbols: The same symbol Crimson has on his arm, and Haze has on the back of his left hand.  

Powers/Abilities: Haze’s magic is vastly different from traditional forms.  His illusion magic commands the target's thoughts and memories to form deep illusions that last over a set period of time, unlike the traditional trick of the eye, however many who have encountered him have reported none of his magic altered said memories and thoughts.  How effective this magic is on true deities and gods isn’t known to him since he has never been to an outside realm besides Arithnia and its towns and cities.  Thus I will let the people he interacts with choose how far his magic affects OCs.  As for the curse magic, it plays into the illusions.  His curse magic isn’t anything related to hex or luck, but rather affecting the physical bodies of his prey.  While the illusion magic he uses is more of a mental trick, his curse applies to the physical.  Though this magic doesn’t harm the target in any way, after all, it’s all an illusion.  The curse magic is like having a phantom feeling on your body.  For example, if you’re wearing a hat for too long and take it off, your body will feel like you still have said hat on.  That is the closest example of Haze’s curse magic I can make.  Finally for the power of Rebellion.  Every Shardbeaer of the Emperor Soul has a specific trait tied to it.  All except for Haze, who oddly enough has an ability tied to his Shard.  Or at least it’s believed to be a Shard.  Unlike Crimson’s Rebellious nature which he inherited from his Shard, Haze has the ability to “rebel” against certain Arithnian magics and powers used against him, practically “rebelling” against their effects on his body.  Now the extent of this power is only toward Arithnians, any other deities or people who cast magic upon him may dull its effects or ignore Rebellion entirely.  Lastly is the power he has over the Chain.  With the blood that flows in Haze, he can temperorily extend the chain and add corrosive effects to it.  Those affects being the famed Scale Rust that Crimson is so burdened with.  Haze obtained the Scale Rust from a Arithnian dragon named Law, who had stopped Haze from [redacted for reasons that will be explained in the RP].  Scale Rust only works on Arithnial metals and weapons and has no affect on biological beings.  The limit to the chain being extended depends on the output of energy that Haze expends in combat or defenceive measures.  It's known that Haze can only hold such a power to his chain for a max of anywhere between a minute and 2.5.  

*Pets: A  silver-eyed snow fox named Dust.  It’s not known if Dust can communicate or has any powers.  Most of what Crimson has encountered leads to Dust being a normal fox. 

Appearance(s): Deep red hair with burnt orange roots that suits Haze's ever brown eyes.  His frame is sleder and thin, not quite to the point of malnurishment.  =15pxHis main outfit is a black t-shirt with a thin line of silver that runs down the middle of his spine.  Additionlally he dons a heavilty worn long and sun-damaged (black?) trench coat that reaches down to the ground and practically drags across it.  His pants are nothing more than old and torn jeans which have become stained a black and brown from ash, stoot and burns.  They reach past his ankles and barely grag across the dirt.  Haze never wears shoes and prefers to always be barefoot. (And yes, I did just copy and paste Crimson's attire and change it a bit...:D)

Personality: Haze is a quiet and thoughtful man in this universe, unlike his chaotic and sadistic counterpart while in Arithnia.  Haze likes to treat his opponents with respect  and unlike Crimson, Haze prefers to be left alone and work alone at times.  Thought he will still interact with the world, the only exception is Dust.  Dust will often claw at Haze's legs to get his attention and warn him if he is outskilled or outmatched.  However if Haze has no choice to fight, he will go all out to finish the job quickly before any blood can be shead, or at least that is often the plan of action.  Aside from that, it is likely that Haze will remain hidden and observes his envoerment before combat or as he walks around, staying silent during any conversation to plan possible escapes routes or advantages hidden within any terrain.  Or at least if such an idea is possible.  To help connect his personality more, he has a certain distrust of anyone related to the elements of fire and light.  This is partly due to his many encounters with Crimson and Flare.  But despire this apparent fear and slight shyness of people, Haze is a rather passive and collected man who loves to indulge in a good book and cook.  Whenever he is out and about he will sometimes play with Dust as he scans new and unfamiliar worlds, countries and cities.  So in a good summary, as long as Haze is at peace, he is no more of a threat than a rabbit is.  

*Theme Song(s): Stay and Decay by Unlike Pluto  

*Typically Worshiped By: Very few humans.

Domain: Haze usually resides in a small pocket plane given to him by the High Council.  He accesses this plane via a key he places into any body of water.  Within said plane there is nothing but a large lake as far as the eye can see and a single ash-ridden tree that blooms only a single flower of green.  

*Temples: None…at least not yet. 

Weapons: Haze wields a variety of weapons depending on where he is.  Mostly he wields the Rebel’s Chain.  An object much like Crimson’s Limiter…well at least in the same metal.  After all, the Chain he uses is what created the Rebel. The chain, depending on how much Haze sacrifices in blood, extends it.  The color is a matte black, but the more blood he expends and the longer it gets the more one can tell the chain is blood.  I know it’s a horrible explanation, I’m just in a rush to get this down so I can start posting again.  I’ll clean it up once I submit this and make any edits necessary… 

Backstory: Haze, once named Nova in Arithnia, is an odd being. 
Originally Haze is a combination of Crimson’s and Flare’s soul…well in the most basic of words. 
In reality, no one knows how Haze is different from Nova. 
At least no one in Forengard does. 
Originally Haze was a Kingslayer, a curse set upon the Kyngs who refused to listen to Order and Judgement.  Haze hunts those people down and kills them in the name of Humanity and Chaos in Arithnia. 
Now in Forengard, he stands in the name of the power that Crimson stole. 
Rebellion. 
As Haze's weapon is called the Rebel’s chain, it was the base for all Limiters and its parts   Using the physical body of Haze and the chain were these Limiters created. Quite literally in the sense that Crimson’s Limiter is Haze’s right arm. 
This effect is spread across the four remaining Limiter users, Crimson with the Rebels Guard, Malicore with the Rebels Soul, Praxis with the Rebels Edge, and of course Haze with the Rebels Chain. 
The Rebels Arc is often called the Rebel’s eye, a Limiter that stops illusions and trap-based magic.  But that is of little concern since none of these Souls are here.  But these pieces that Crimson and his friends took are what drove Haze to become a Kingslayer and an illusionist, to give the impression that he was never affected by the curses set upon him.  Haze chases them all one by one to retrieve his body, or what is left of it. 
Crimson is always his prime target as he controls the domain of Judgement, the rival to Rebellion.  

*Crush: None.  Not in any universe.  But willing to negotiate…maybe.  

Last edited by wolffighting3768 (July 11, 2023 19:43:42)

I'll make notes since it makes sense to do so. No sense in making someone else read it again. 

-The description of the powers and abilities looks fine to me, but I understand theoretical description and actual execution almost always look different, so all I can do is advise active communication while using powers/abilities.
-Also wanted to let you know that Ash has a character (a deity) named Dust, so you might want to change the name or exercise discretion when you talk about your character compared to theirs.
-The appearance section seems to be missing? I moved the outfits section up to there but didn't see a physical description. I might have missed it. Please add it when you have the chance, either by editing your original post or making a new post.
-I'm notorious for making too-long posts/forms, but the personality part looks a bit basic even with the factor of intrigue factored in. Maybe add a few flaws or connect some traits to aspects of his backstory that you can reveal, or discuss how he might act while being in a more casual and/or new environment. 

Overall I think what you have is a solid start, but I can't accept the form yet due to the missing sections. Please add in the missing components whenever you can and let me know if you have any questions. Thank you! And again, welcome back.

-Galaxian-

Yeah, it's a base to be worked on before I can introduce him.  I'll start right away.  I just needed input on what to fix that's all.  And Ash, I am 100% fine with that too, it could turn into the stupidest and most fun part of our characters! 
 

Last edited by wolffighting3768 (July 9, 2023 18:03:09)

All edits are done for now!

Alrighty this is Time's input.

I do agree with Galaxian's assessments. Basically. He usually goes into more detail when it comes to accepting characters imo. I would like to see Haze be developed more as a character in rp as well though. I also do wonder about his weapon as well.

Is this another isekaied character from you? Or an AU character? I'm presuming the former, but I am double checking.