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SpecterTheGreat wrote:
Basket Cat wrote:
I'm gonna crigne at them poses you can't stop me
*stops you*
YOU CAN'T STOP ME
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SpecterTheGreat wrote:
Basket Cat wrote:
I'm gonna crigne at them poses you can't stop me
"Don't Stop Me Now" played in my head after reading this
Yeah same actually
DON'T
STOP
ME
NOW
DON'T
STOP
BECAUSE I'M
HAVING A GOOD TIME
HAVING A GOOD TIIIIIIMEEEEEEEE
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SpecterTheGreat wrote:
Basket Cat wrote:
I have the basic outline (ish) for Kurotama now
Oooh that's neat!
Would you liek to see :D
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Basket Cat wrote:
SpecterTheGreat wrote:
Basket Cat wrote:
I have the basic outline (ish) for Kurotama now
Oooh that's neat!
Would you liek to see :D
YELL HEAH
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SpecterTheGreat wrote:
Basket Cat wrote:
SpecterTheGreat wrote:
Oooh that's neat!Would you liek to see :D
YELL HEAH
YELL HEAH
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Also just out of curiosity are you a sub or dub person? And do you skip OPs and EDs?
I prefer subs but also won't complain if there's a Spanish dub XD
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Ok so I was thinking of dividing the game up into chapters but I haven't figured out how yet so there's that
Anyway
Feel free to ask questions
Act I (sort of):
-Neat little prologue describing the Dark Ages
-Ariana goes to meet up with her sister Gia in the castle gardens
-Subsequently gets kidnapped
-Thrown into a dungeon by Kieran (also Kieran is the villain) because ~revenge~
-Ariana is not a fan
-Meets Indigo who is also not a fan
-They two break out and escape and somehow end up in New York City
-Meet Lyra and Leo who run a potion shop and also know a lot about dark magic somehow (they're not dark wizards)
-Ariana comes to the conclusion that she does not know where her home is. This proves problematic since literally nobody else knows either
-Ariana and Indigo meet the White Dragon (basically he's a god) and he tells them that he needs Ariana to get rid of Kieran, because it's against his oath to directly intervene himself (classic god stuff, see Greek Mythology), so he gives Ariana a seal that will let her defeat Kieran
-He transports them to Kieran's palace, Ariana has a panic attack because she doesn't know how to fight really so Indigo carries the entire thing until Ariana uses the seal
-Plot twist, the seal doesn't get rid of Kieran, it traps her soul inside of Ariana's
-Ariana doesn't wake up for three days, also she has this pretty black stripe in her hair now
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Act II:
-Ariana still doesn't know how to phone home
-There is no time to worry about phoning home, the street is on fire and it's blue
-The squishy dragon boi is introduced except wait he's not friendly
-Oh gods he almost killed Ariana
-Indigo is not happy with the situation
-The unfriendly squishy boi is Indigo's twin brother who she hasn't seen in two months because he was kidnapped and brainwashed apparently
-Also his name is Amaranth
-Ariana feels bad for both of the twins and decides to screw it and try to fix the problem
-Turns out Kieran's soul isn't just trapped inside Ariana's, Kieran's consciousness is still very active and can and will try to take over Ariana's body but that can't happen yet because she's too weak and if Amaranth kills Ariana Kieran dies too so she tells Ariana how to break the curse on Amaranth using dark magic
-Ariana can now use dark magic through Kieran's soul
-Boss fight ends with Ariana playing a pan flute and Amaranth immediately falls asleep and he is uncursed
-The true squishy boy is introduced and oh my gods he radiates Kel Energy
-It has been like two weeks and Amaranth is healed because Indigo was relentless during the boss fight
-Ariana again questions how to get home, Amaranth says he could fly them all there
-Kieran helps find Ephania because she knows where it is (makes sense, she had to kidnap Ariana)
-Turns out that the castle has been completely ransacked and Skylight (the capital) is kind of burning
-Ariana's dad and her sister have both been turned into weird life-sized plush things and are kind of not alive at the moment (her mom's been dead for like ten years so she's not here)
-The attack is now very personal and Ariana is not happy with this
-Also there's like this weird crevice thing that's spewing darkness so that's probably not good
-The other four kingdoms have the same problem, and it turns out that the fissures are from the dark world. This is not supposed to happen and if too many fissures open the light world will definitely explode and maybe the dark world too, and there are currently more than the five big ones
-Ariana keeps seeing this creepy shadow thing and decides maybe it would be a good idea to close the fissures
-OFF TO THE DARK WORLD
-A lot of demon characters are introduced, some try to kill them, some try to kill them and become friends instead (lookin at you, Blackjack. Stop flirting with Indigo, it's not working), and some are nice from the start
-Turns out that a demon is an umbrella term and includes any living thing that's from the dark world. Hellhound thing? Demon. Practically human but with powers? Demon.
-Also they even have a dragon god too, the Black Dragon.
-Lore? It's thought by demons that they were either sent to the dark world because of their powers or that they dark world gave them their powers (they were sent to the dark world because of their powers but they don't know that), but it's generally accepted that they weren't originally from the dark world.
-Allegra is introduced and also the twins don't have real parents, they literally magicked into existence on Halloween
-It's been like maybe a month idk
-Amaranth officially has a huge crush on Ariana and it's very cute
-Also he gets stabbed by a shadow puppet and dies protecting Ariana
-Indigo is now Depressed
-SIDE PLOT TIME
-Ariana recognizes that Indigo is probably actually losing her mind in her refusal to accept that Amaranth is dead and Kieran (very helpfully) says that it's possible to revive him but it'll be harder because his body basically turned into ash soon after he died
-Ariana basically enters Amaranth's Headspace in order to revive him using Psychic Link(tm) and sees a bunch of his memories which fills in the rest of his backstory
-Ariana fight against the curse that's still dormant in his soul and once she does she basically plays the piano with him and revives him and symbolism stuff idk
-AMARANTH LIVES
-Downside: He doesn't have his wings anymore. Like at all. This does not help the situation and Amaranth is mildly upset by this
-The fissures continue to be sealed up but as long as the main fissure is being controlled they'll keep opening back up
-mORE CHARACTERS
-The trio meets the Black Dragon who's the local dragon god and she gives Amaranth magic wings because she can't replace them completely because dark magic ain't letting that happen
-Also she gives Indigo the ability to use her shadow as a weapon basically and teaches Ariana how to make a sword with her light magic so now she can actually fight
-The trio make discover the king's castle and have to fight a jester demon who is simultaneously sad and manic
-The king is not a fan of the trio breaking into his castle so he uses his fancy magic and 1) traps the twins in an everchanging maze and 2) traps Ariana inside her own mind at the center of it
-this is bad news
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SpecterTheGreat wrote:
Also just out of curiosity are you a sub or dub person? And do you skip OPs and EDs?
I prefer subs but also won't complain if there's a Spanish dub XD
I'm usually a dub person but the Jojo sub is just so memed that you can't watch it any other way
*cough* not like me and my friend didn't watch part 1 dubbed *cOUGH*
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SpecterTheGreat wrote:
AHA YES
I'VE SEEN IT SO MANY TIMES AND I WILL NEVER GET TIRED OF IT
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Act III:
-Amaranth decides "screw it" and pretty much punches his way to the center
-He and Indigo get Ariana to wake up and she's still kind of in a trance and very confused
-Kieran basically pilots Ariana because plot twist she's not actually a bad guy anymore! The seal is slowly taking apart her consciousness, but Ariana's soul is also purifying it and wow why does she look so similar to Ariana
-Ariana regains control and now it's time for THE FINAL BATTLE
-Noxire (he's the demon king btw) he doesn't like that he's being defeated and starts raging and Kieran comes to a realization: Noxire is Kieran's reincarnated child that she saved by becoming a dark elf but after it corrupted her she ended up murdering him anyway and his soul was reincarnated as a demon.
-Kieran sacrifices the last of her consciousness to save him after 200 years of rage and grief. Noxire, his mind restored, apologizes to Ariana, and asks her to look after his people, and to make right what he did wrong. Kieran appears as a spirit, finally free from her corruption, and she and Noxire both fade away, now able to rest.
-As Ariana is passed the role of the dark world's ruler, the sun rises for the first time in two hundred years. There is only one thing left to do.
-The trio return to the light world. The fissures have closed, and Ariana's family has been brought back to life, and the two dragon gods appear as well. At Ariana's request, the White Dragon lowers the barrier surrounding the kingdom. No longer will the elves hide from the rest of the world.
-Ariana tells her family that she can't live in the light world anymore, that her home is in the dark world, with the people she was given the task of taking care of. With Indigo and Amaranth, she steps into the fissure, and smiles, before it fades to black.
So anyways that's the rough outline what do you think
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I spent an hour typing this out
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I'm not sure what emotion this makes me feel
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SpecterTheGreat wrote:
I'm not sure what emotion this makes me feel
idk man but I'm just really impressed with how smooth it is
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SpecterTheGreat wrote:
Me playing it on piano but I forgot to learn the rest of it and keep screwing it up:
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So a while ago I wrote Ariana's father's name down and I wrote "Noriaki"
PAST ME IS THAT A JOJO REFERENCE
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At this point everything is a Jojo reference
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Also btw I did read your posts about your game's plot, was replying the other day but I got cut halfways and then I didn't reply rip
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Basket Cat wrote:
SpecterTheGreat wrote:
Me playing it on piano but I forgot to learn the rest of it and keep screwing it up:
Me on the piano liteally every time I try to play smthn
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RIP
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Basket Cat wrote:
SpecterTheGreat wrote:
I'm not sure what emotion this makes me feel
idk man but I'm just really impressed with how smooth it is
T-pose Jonathan
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Btw how's Battle Tendency going
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I haven't watched any more episodes since I saw my friend last week, but I'm going to her house tomorrow so maybe we'll watch more of it then :D
(there is no way we're watching Jojo at my house with my 10-year-old sister there o.o)
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So did you see the thing I mentioned on my homethread
My dreams are legitimately getting out of hand
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Basket Cat wrote:
So did you see the thing I mentioned on my homethread
My dreams are legitimately getting out of hand
I did see lol
Dreams are always really weird so I don't know what to tell you lol
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Also I would like to say that I always read your homethread even if I don't reply
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That means a lot for some reason xD thank you