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December 14, 2021 11:13:57  #211


Re: {Apparently We're Forum Twins Now} Chat Thread for Time and Eliza

Actually no, never mind

How about if you call your group anything? The trio, did you I heard you mention Kurotama?


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December 14, 2021 11:41:51  #212


Re: {Apparently We're Forum Twins Now} Chat Thread for Time and Eliza

Oh tHEM *pulls out giant stack of lists, notes, and random scenes* 

yES WELL--


I call them the Kurotama Trio because I've named their "story" Kurotama, at least for now. It's much easier than saying Ariana, Amaranth, and Indigo and more specific than saying "the trio."


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December 14, 2021 15:25:50  #213


Re: {Apparently We're Forum Twins Now} Chat Thread for Time and Eliza

And what does kurotama mean?


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December 14, 2021 15:35:40  #214


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It means "black soul" in Japanese. Since it kinda revolves around dark magic and the like it seemed like a fitting name.


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December 14, 2021 16:02:33  #215


Re: {Apparently We're Forum Twins Now} Chat Thread for Time and Eliza

Oh that's fun

Is everyone like a dark magic user


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December 14, 2021 16:07:54  #216


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No Ariana's the only main dark magic at this point.

The other one got unalived and soul-trapped inside Ariana which is why she can use it


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December 14, 2021 17:51:42  #217


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I have am unlive moment

And so Ariana's dark magic is worth enough of the title name because...? It's really important or just cool?


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December 15, 2021 09:44:00  #218


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It also seems (to me) to hint towards Kieran, who, despite being unalived pretty early on, is essential to the plot. I like to describe dark magic as "corrupting the soul of those who use it. Corrupted, or black, souls. Kurotama.
so
And if I turn it into an manga or a video game, Kurotama sounds way cooler than Black Soul. Sounds too close to Dark Souls anyway xD


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December 15, 2021 16:27:58  #219


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True

So the starting event is the inheriting of the dark magic?


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December 15, 2021 16:28:14  #220


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Or launching event


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December 15, 2021 17:42:16  #221


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No the starting event is getting kidnapped


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December 16, 2021 01:37:46  #222


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Like starting event of the plot?


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December 26, 2021 16:12:00  #223


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Ye


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December 26, 2021 16:12:56  #224


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She gets the dark magic after unaliving her kidnapper


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December 26, 2021 17:52:55  #225


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Epic

Oh wait Kieren is the kidnapper? Why?


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December 26, 2021 18:09:12  #226


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See, Ariana's a descendant of one of the original light elves, who were responsible for defeating the dark elves, specifically the light elf with the blood of the Dragon King. Originally, it's implied that it's because she's a dark elf, but the true reason is because the Dragon King didn't help her when her son, Noxire, was dying and she became a dark elf in order to save him. Because of the corruption of dark magic, this betrayal evolved into revenge over two hundred years, which is later mirrored in her reincarnated son, the Demon King.


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December 26, 2021 19:39:43  #227


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Wait wait I'm very confused did you mix up some names or terms or something or am I misreading


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December 26, 2021 20:50:21  #228


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dangit i messed up the explanation

let me try that again

Kieran kidnaps Ariana because Ariana is a descendant of the one of the original light elves, the one with the blood of the Dragon King. There are two reasons for this: the light elves wiped out the dark elves, who had been gaining power over Ephania, and the Dragon King did not help Kieran when she asked for him to heal her dying son. By kidnapping Ariana (and probably killing her), Kieran thought that it would be enough to seriously hurt the Dragon so he could feel what she did.

Obviously this doesn't pan out because Ariana escapes and then the Dragon gives her magic to unalive Kieran and trap her soul but ya know


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December 27, 2021 03:46:41  #229


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Is like, Arianna important enough for the light elves and the Dragon King for him to help her out or something?


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December 27, 2021 10:22:57  #230


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Ariana is the Crown Princess of the entire Ephanian kingdom

So yes, she is important enough xD


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December 27, 2021 17:31:31  #231


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Oh yeah. That's pretty important.

so where do the other two come in?


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December 27, 2021 20:52:35  #232


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You mean the twins?

Indigo was summoned to be one of Kieran's servants (against her will, obviously). Either she helped Ariana escape from Kieran's palace and the two wound up in New York City, or Ariana escaped herself and first met Indigo there. Haven't decided yet.

Amaranth was cursed by Noxire and sent to kill Ariana. Obviously this curse is broken and he becomes part of the group. His first encounter with Ariana involved him almost burning her to a crisp

Yeah that happened


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December 27, 2021 22:25:29  #233


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Oh wait is the setting the real world or another land? Or a blend of both?


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December 28, 2021 12:37:23  #234


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Yes


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December 28, 2021 23:21:17  #235


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Yes?


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December 29, 2021 11:17:20  #236


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Basically take the real world as it currently is (minus a pandemic), then throw in a hidden magic island and an alternate dimension


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January 5, 2022 01:00:19  #237


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So yes but more


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January 5, 2022 01:01:02  #238


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It comes with its pros and cons. Yes


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January 5, 2022 09:39:19  #239


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yeah


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January 5, 2022 14:28:07  #240


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Ues


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